Pío: I think you should have made a greater effort, specially taking into account that you published this entry almost 10 days later than you should have. Your items are quite incomplete, you should have started with imperatives, since you´re giving instructions. Eg: Buy a crystal ball Be mysterious (how?) What kind of "special cards" should a fortune teller have? Be more descriptive next time.
Pío: I think you should have made a greater effort, specially taking into account that you published this entry almost 10 days later than you should have.
ResponderEliminarYour items are quite incomplete, you should have started with imperatives, since you´re giving instructions.
Eg: Buy a crystal ball
Be mysterious (how?)
What kind of "special cards" should a fortune teller have?
Be more descriptive next time.
In need of improvement.