miércoles, 7 de noviembre de 2012

When love calls


Activity: We were supposed to write a romantic poem in which we should include some of this things:
  • Minimum --> 8 lines
  • 1 metaphor, 1 simile and 1 sensory image



I remember the first time I saw you,
I practically lost up my mind.
I have never seen something so cute
As yours eyes when they shine.

I remember the rays coming from your hair,
You were pretty shy but that’s okay.   
It is not even fair,
I hope I can see you again.


1 comentario:

  1. You´ve done a great job Pío. Your poem even rhymes! I really appreciate the effort and congratulate you on your result.
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